Lovely backgrounds. They're really good. I like your colors. They match and blend in with the background.
When you're describing the big... gray bearded... thingy, an improvement could be that you move the camera up his body or something. It's some type of movement so the audience feels like something's happening instead of showing him just standing there. It's describing how tall he is, so you could have the camera go from the waist up. If the character or the background isn't moving then at least make the camera do it.
Basically, Try not to have scenes that don't have anything moving. Like, make the leaves move or the camera if nothing else is going on (visually).
Good luck on your next flash~