Well
Not as good as your new one. Needs more action :P
Reviews for "Bat on the loose"
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Batman is ok, but ive been more of a marvel person, i liked the story here, and how he chases after that bat. The graphics are nice, and you put good effort into how you animated everything, i liked how its ends with that creepy bat being caught...
Maybe next time you could turn up the background music a bit, because it was a bit hard to hear at times, but it was still good to hear...
~X~
Awesome
Ahhhh yessss, finally, the Batman we all behold in our deep feelings: A few silent (but very threatening) words, and a lot of relentless grounding of puny criminals....Indeed, it brings me back to the Warner Bros. 1994 Batman cartoon, were his quiet but grim performance delighted us fans to the last cell...good old days. Buddy, you have done a great deed here portraiting that idealistic image of Bob Kane's Batman. The art and the graphics are great; the idea well carried...although I would've enjoyed a real combat scene and a longer script...Anyways, since I want you to make it to the top 20, i will give you a good review. Kudos for you, you really did a great job for your first movie (specially the wing-cape opening scene!!! that was the best!). One remark, please, PLEASE put some sound effects and some real dialogues. :)
Francisco Garcia
Nice!
Very impressive! The drawing were well done, It reminds me of the old Batman series. There are a few problems though. The rain, is way too big and it looked like static. The background music was very soft compared to the sound effects. There wasn't enough action, I was expecting to see Batman and the Man-Bat fight but all he did was ride his car and shoot a net. I'am a big Batman fan so I'll give this a good rating anyway.
Kind of cool...
The rain in this was really distracting... It obstructed the view the whole time... I don't think you should use it at all...
You probably don't realize, but making rain white in the dark really doesn't work unless there's a light source that is really close. If you were walking down the street at night in the rain, you really wouldn't see the rain until it hit something... It wouldn't be glowing white in the darkness... It doesn't produce its own light, so it wouldn't stand out. You'd see it splashing in puddles, or hitting your window or windshield... It would appear all back if it was in between you and a light source, but other than that you don't see the individual drops at night... If you still insisted on drawing the rain, maybe you should make it black against bright surfaces, or really dark gray against darker surfaces.
The art work was really good... The story was not so good... I think you should try to make a story that is a little more complicated or interesting... Or even original... Maybe you could make up your own bad guy, instead of just recycling the ones from the animated series... It could be like a gangster or something... Maybe you could find a friend who likes to act, so Bat Man could have a voice.
I noticed that one of the weapons Bat Man could've chosen was "knife" when he was looking at that computer screen in the Batmobile... What would happen if he chose that? Would the Bat Mobile pull out a switch blade? What the hell? If Bat Man is going to use a knife, why not just keep it in his pocket? Why would a computer have anything to do with knives?