I agree with ayumilove2 & u
Its a great song if
1. it didn't repeat so much
2. the first two mins like you said where skipped
After I got 4 mins into the song you mix some things up and it suddenly became a great piece from there. I say you you doing well be you just need to learn when to stop a good thing. (like the repeats at the start) I give this song a 6 start rating for new ideas.