I give you an overall of 8.5
It's not quite a 9 , but way better than an 8.
I am amazed by the quantity of original styles on NG, some people just sticks to stick fights, video games, DBZ, the clock crew... but these people are wrong...
You made a really interesting plot even tough the story is just a guy getting kick off a club (or something). It's real stylish !
GJ. Keep on flashing! (making flash animation)