In the field of RPGs, you encounter people that are absolutely fierce in their choice of game. This occurs because those people enjoy a certain innovation in that game--Counterattacks, Timed double strikes, Cool magic or just a really deep plotline.
I realize that this is just a demo; But I want to tell you ahead of time that your innovation didn't exist. If you go back now, and check what you've done to this point, you could pull a real winner out of what is otherwise a heap of scrap.
Good luck, and I look foreward to seeing the finished product.