Happy With That?
You accomplished A lot. But?
The sound was awesome. The quality was great. The submission was overall perfect. Hence The ten points, And 5/5 You were granted. That was just overall a pretty amazing song, And there isn't a whole lot to complain about.
Except what you actually wanted to give the feel of, Wasn't the feel you gave across to me personally. Except towards the end I had a feel for it.
Also, I think your 'Script' For the actual song should be posted in the description. I mean sure, Its good to have people feel what they personally feel. But it would be cool to see if me, And others saw exactly what you wanted us all to see. Just an idea?
Great work!