good, but lacks.
Well for one, the graphics were great. wonderful drawing style, fluid animation, it looked fantastic.
However the audio really took away from it. The voices werent' very good, and didn't seem to fit the characters very well. Plus the recording quality was poor.
It was a good idea, and i'd like to see more of it in the future.
wewt!
i see a fav comic author has come to newgrounds. and her first flash is neat! me think scorchy is to hyper and random....like me! ^.^ anywayz. it's nice to see you here at last (first psy then al..*cough* Mr O.M.A) i think everyone should be more hyper and random. lets do that together and make the world for us lol jk (it ain't a bad idea though). anywayz great job!
I am stunned,
For a first, according to your words, it are great :D.
pretty good
it was short but sweet. keep wrling on your animation and get a better mic or up the sound quality. but aside from being short it was ace. kinda funny too but its better that quite alot of 'humor' on ng. keep it up! :)
not bad for a first!
I haven't sent in mine yet but i'm still workin on it. Yours is pretty good. The sounds were ok, the graphics where most in need of work but the originality was iminent.