pretty mice stuff, i might just say that you should experiment with multiple leads in different parts of the track, or even layer different leads to try and make a really original sound for you
pretty good though
SNARE EFECT= my guess is you eq'ed the bass end a little higher, added blood overdrive, pumped up the amp gain, then turned the knob under that(cant remember name) counterclock-wise, in order to keep the distort sounds, but lower thier punch, or mabye you eq'ed it with a spike in the wave, hard to explain what i mean by that but yeah it makes sounds like kicks actualy have more defined notes to them
i didnt get tolisten to the whole track, but i didnt hear anything refering to pirates, so unless you DID do that, mabye throw in like sounds of the ocean, or swords clashing, or some fuckhead going AARRGGHGGHH, you know, but i only made it to like halfway till the buff just stopped...
kicks are alright, not much punch behind them, but thats not always needed
the intro, there is like squeeky feedback noises drifting in and out , im guesin you increased the feedback on one ofthe effects like phaser, or flanger, pretty cool technique, ive done it with claps b4, makes shits sound interesting, if you didnt do that, how did you get the squeeks???
overall your improving, just like any audio artist should if they actually put themselves to it, which you are...hopefully
peace to the fuck to the out to the my friend, until to the next to the time