It was allright.
Could be a bit better and funnier though. Try to make it look like you have spent a lot of time on it.
Reviews for "the busstop"
sjoert responds:
Well yeah I didn't hehe :P
Fair work.
I liked the B/W thing, the plot is good as is not excessively vulgar or violent (But, is possible to be excessively vulgar or violent?) and overall ok.
Noice!
Lovely music, Nice style, Great idea!
"The End" sign sucked, I think it woulda been better to have a the screen black from the outside in, ending on the guy's face on the ground then say "The End" But that's just me... other than that good stuff I liked it...
Don't be afraid of color
Color couldd have added a lot to this piece. The animation was okay (and limited animation/ bad animation is fine) but the story and twist didn't have anough punch to support the lack of animatio. That's why Saturday morning cartoons were so horrible in the 70's and early 80's. Use color in the next one and try to make it shorter and less complex. Keep it up though.
It was good.
The flash was good i liked the idea anad i couldn't help but laugh when the guy jumps on what appears to be a granny lol. But like the guy before me said it's painfull on the eye's everything is a white kinda tone. But thats just me being picky. Keep up the good work and hopefully we will see more of your flashes soon.