you should try not too cram so much into one page. this looks more like it would have looked and felt a lot better as a two page then a one
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Modeseven responds:
Perhaps, I've tried to avoid drawing millions of pages and also use lots of panels to get across a feeling of quick paced chaos ensuing but maybe doing less on a page or combining stuff and cuting out unnessecary stuff could help. I dont want this thing to go on for 2000 pages though.