I'm just a poor boy, I need no sympathy...
But..I'm a girl. Anywho...The music was ok. But I kind of felt like there needed to be more minor than the major of that Queen song. I have to say though, that it was very creative. To me, parts of it just felt a little drawn out and wavering in attention grabbing goodness. That also may have been partially due to the music. The way it stops here and there and it seems like the musician may be looking for the next key to hit or something. I do think that this is a good flash..The scene where she is walking through the hall and looking through the keyhole was pretty nice. Comparing this to the first, your skills are progressively getting better and better. Keep it up :)