good, but can be improved
Sorry man, it's an ok song, but I just don't know how this made front page in ambient.
I'll be completely honest here, although the middle and ending are very good I find the first minute to be choppy and almost annoying. I also think the beat is a little too heavy and grounded for an ambient song. I think it should have more of a wandering sound.
Sorry if I've ended the 5/5 streak, but bland praise never helped anyone better themselves or their work.
If you want some good comparisons in the ambient genre, I highly recommend you check out the song Coma Dream by TheOrichalcon here on newgrounds. If there is a perfect way to do ambient, he invented it.
Hope to hear some more of your stuff, keep at it!