Very nice a good amount of blood and a pretty hot girl there and because of that sash or cloth with the rune like writing makes me wonder what she was wearing before it was pretty much destroyed from the battle she had lol either way this is a great piece and as far as the whole disproportion thing dont let that get to you i dont think they understand what a pin up girl is xD also cant wait to see how your game is coming along as well remember if you need help try asking around newgrounds and im sure some guys will give you some tips for making a good flash anyway great job and I look forward to your next master piece :D
Reviews for "''Cruel Revelation''"
Fatelogic responds:
Thanks. Glad u liked it ^^
About your points:
1) The game project had to be halted until further advice. Basically I'm meeting some serious script and artblocks, so it will take a long time... or even maybe never, who knows.
2) I don't mind the critique they gave me. I think they said it with true intention to help. That I agree with their criteria or not is another thing altogether. Besides, I tend to take more to heart critique from artist more experienced than me, otherwise it could be just personal opinion or taste from the reviewer, not an elaborated guess based on practice (no offense though, I know the intention is good).
Anyway, thanks again ^^
An amazing piece of work; sexy, bloody, and oh-so foreboding! :D
Fatelogic responds:
Thx bud ^^
I agree with Idioteque123, and I would also like to point out that the waist is a little too thin. The background looks really good, I like the effects you use, as well as the palet of collors. Next time pay more attention to the proportions and the place where the breasts are. Otherwise, Good Job!
Fatelogic responds:
As I said back, sadly, I don't agree with you. The waist being thin, however, is something many point out in my pieces, but the thing is that that waist length is part of my style (meaning it's intentional). Take Clamp for example: they draw characters with legs twice as long as they should be, but not because they have anatomy problems, but because it's theyr "style". Here's the same thing.
I'm glad you liked it though.
I'll bet she can materialize a whole heck of a lot of demon tentacles :P
Fatelogic responds:
XD Nah, not really. Lady Camilia could, but they're something a little different from regular tentacles... more like hellfire snakes xD
It could definitely use some work. The first thing I noticed was that the hips were very under-pronounced. Second the breasts were slightly too high and a bit unnatural looking. Third the legs are overall disproportionate- thighs too big, knees too small.
Fatelogic responds:
Sadly, I don't agree with you at all, but I appreciate the intention pal.