hhmm...
You have great artwork, and from watching a few of these now, I noticed it has a very good story...but, you lack animation. As artistic as these flashes are, they're quite boring. Not many people like reading off of little bubbles and watching pictures fade in and out. If you made the characters or some other elements in flash, you could animate them and make this WAY more exciting. I realize this is meant to be a comic, but to compete with the best on NG, you'll need to incorporate way more animation into your submissions. Some voice acting would be nice too, but that is less important than getting some more animation in there.