Reviews for "Up The Platform"

4/5 This is a great idea, but a few suggestions...

This is a great idea/setup for this game, but it needs a few improvements. The first of which is make it so that you don't get stuck when you are halfway into a moving block (unless that's intentional-if it is, you might want to mention that), and better graphics never hurt anybody. Fun game, though, I liked it!


Wow dude this was actually good ! i injoied playing it, challenging and still beatable, i must say im very impressed.
Original and cool.

Very good job.


It was pretty good.

Some pointers:
Make a defined background, where if you fall down the background moves up. And in a background where the differenence isn't just vertical, (and I suggest making somewhat more detailed backgrounds anyway, like outer space, or a spaceship, or something. Spice it up a little) then have the screen scroll to the left when you go to the right, and scroll to the right when you go to the left. Of course, if the background is really far away, (such as in the outer space example) then don't parallax scrolling and stay stationary.

Getting stuck in platforms is not fun, make the physics a little more detailed. If a player gets stuck between a platform and a rock, however, something needs to happen. I suggest they get sent to the beginning of the level.

Speaking of that, on some levels, when I fell down, I came back up on places which were farther forward than I was before.

Also, if the character is on a moving platform, he would move along with the platform. In the game, the character stays exactly still. And unless the character has no friction, then he would move along with the platform, and if he doesn't have friction, he wouldn't be able to walk or jump in the first palace.

I liked the way you didn't feel the need to arbitrarily jam in monsters and just kept it nice and simple. Platformers with monsters in them often end up too much like mario games. This was unique and clever. And a few more levels would be nice, heh heh heh.

Anyway, clean cut list of possible improvement:
-One or more semi-detailed background(s).
-Parallax scrolling (unless the background is really far away.)
-Better death animation (have the guy fall into a lava pit, or have the guy spin around while falling, just don't let it be boring.)
-Don't let the guy get stuck in blocks.
-While you're at it, Give "the guy" a name, Chuck or something.
-Don't come up with a cheesy story, please. Any semblance of background or story should only be a fun little addition. The player should spend his majority of time on the actual game.
-Players should begin at the start of the level when they fall.
-If Chuck is on a moving block, make him move with it.
-Keep the challenges only platform challenges, but possibly make the levels harder as you go on.
-More levels, I love platformers.

Thanks for listening. Most of these changes wouldn't take up too much data, or don't take up that much data at all.

Glad to help

gunman responds:

I have the backgrounds ready, and i'll be releasing more levels soon. Hopefully i'll cover the "block glitch" as it's been named, but the code is really fustrating. The physics code doesent work if the block mover over you, only if you try to go into a box.

On the last level (the purple-blue level), the code syntax is kinda mixed, so that if you die in the kinda hard elevator, you appear on the platform over it, which should only be accessable if surviving the elevator.

The "Friction glitch" as you call it is not a glitch. I put it there on purpase, to keep players from just standing on an elevator, relaxing. It makes me so mad when they do that :P

New traps are also featuring as:

- Spikes on one side of the rotating blocks.
- Sinking Cieling(i dunno how to spell cieling :P)
- blocks keeping you from getting away from traps.

The new version will include 20 levels, easy one "hand-crafted".

A boss on Level 21.

Bonus levels, which will be activated by finding hidden paths inside different levels. Eash level does NOT have a secret level switch though. The secret level switch will look like this: <=> and will sometimes be moving.

These are the features i hope to include in the next version, although the imfamous "block glitch" is most unlikely to be fixed, as it will require master level ActionScript.

Thanks for the review

Rather cool really

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Quite a few glitches you need to work out though.

On the red block level, when you die you don't get put back onto a block.

On a couple of levels with moving blocks you can just stuck inside of them.

But really I found the game quite fun. I felt the need to finish it :P So I did.

The mushroom dude is rather nifty looking. I like him.

not a very "playable" game

I hope this isent the full because it feels more like a beta/alpha,
i'd like to see some updates or a release of a very full and rich game, potential is there just not used to teh fullest, good job tho ^.^