Kick ass dude
I'm always impressed by your Hip-Hop songs, from the first time I heard a song of yours, I knew you were a metal monster but I discovered you were a kick ass "Rap maker" a while after :D
Awesome song, with a nice beat although you made it with Fl Studio 4, so good job here. My only complain about drums would be the Ride Cymbal during the chorus, it sounded a bit weak but it's not too important. Also, it would be good to add some crashes at the begining of the choruses. I loved the "whistles" during the whole song, this and the drums gave that Hip-Hop feeling.
Nice guitar riff, it was very groovy and fitted the beat very well. The guitar tone was nice and very clean as diminitive said, that kicks ass. And the best part of the song was definitely the chorus ... what an epic chorus! The chord progression was simple but very effective and it reminded the two first songs I submitted to NG, two Scarface songs metalized :D.
The melody of the chorus was so sweet, nice vibrato. The synth pad also increased that epic stuff. Nice bass work too, I dug the tone a lot. Overall, I loved it, that guy will be proud of it ... if he ever use it :s. Anyway thanks for the contribution on my thread, I'm honoured ;).
Keep on kicking tons of asses my friend <3. 5'd by the way :P.