Hmmm....
The movie was pretty good for your first time. Your drawings need a little improvement, but that will grow in time. You had very cool music. I thought it fit perfectly with the movie. The blood was decent. You should have more spray in your blood. But overall good movie man. Respond if you can.
~*~Death~To~Seasons~*~
Thank-you very much DeathToSeasons. No, my drawings need a lot of imporovement, but that will be far better in later movies. The graghics will include shadows on character models as well as guns that will look life-like. Thank-you for your music comment, because I spent some time doing it.
Thank-you DeathToSeasons for your helpful review.
((( NOTBAD )))
Well notbad, and your first, one thing i always tell new artists to newgrounds is bring down that file size, which is the same in yourcase, but it interested me in story, the art could be better though, still nice work, i hope to see more soon...
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Thanks for the definitive review. I will look out for the size in later movies. I wanted to get the sound quality up, and since I'm only using Flash 3 here(EEp) you can only import wav files. What a drag. But thakn-you for your nice and frendly review.
Not to bad dynamo
I enjoyed waching your flash. The only real complaint I have is it reminds me to much of the matrix. I don't know if it was your intention, but i've noticed that alot of people seem to incorperate this theme into there flashes. Take it easy, and keep improveing.
LOL. Well actually no that wasn't my intention to make it like of The Matrix. However The Matrix is my favourite series, so if you think this is like the Matrix i suppose I'll have to take it as a compliment.
Thanks for the review g spot.
Voices were good,
But I have to say, I'm VERY confused.
I can see how you're trying to link your story together, but you should probably stop avoiding all transition by substituting text in. What chip? Why is it wanted? Why does he have it? Are his dreams forshadowing? Paranoia? And just why can his 'arms' extend to almost twice his body length?
Mix in a can of refinement and you've got yourself something to work with. I recomend avoiding any more inspiration from 'The Matrix'. It's bad for you.
Yes, you have a right to be confused. Basicaly, this is just the beginning of the series. Your not meant to really know what's going on right now, as the sequels will explain everything. Also, sorry man, I won't be averting my attention from The Matrix - Its my favourite series.
But than-you for your commment.
Ok
This is a promising series.
The graphics werent that great, the style has been used before (not that you using it is a bad thing) and the sound was ok.
Somethings you might want to consider for your next animation, having a background, maybe modifing the people and the guns.
Cheers!
~LamboFactor
Lol. Well actually the 3 things I'm doing for the sequels is redo the guns, characters, and backgrounds. It will be much better I hope. Thank-you for your reveiew LamboFactor.