Awesome :D
I really liked the tune and progression. There was some clipping, but that's easy enough to fix. Anyway, awesome song, keep it up.
Reviews for "[Helth & GW] - Gate to Heaven"
gamerworld14 responds:
Thank HelthRMX for this great song. He is amazing... be sure to check out his stuff!
:D
sick
this is some good stuff...awesome melody
a fun song to listen to
the main thing to work on is the volume
gamerworld14 responds:
thanks a lot :D happy to hear you like it!
Well done
Very well structured, I liked the piano riff and how the song worked around it. Some nice detailed synth stuff in there too. 5d
:D
gamerworld14 responds:
thanks a lot!
Not Bad...
Well, it's not bad that's for sure. And their are definitely some very interesting things about this song. The lead that comes in around 1:50 over the sawtooth lead that you have as your rhythm is very nice. the filter was kind of cool too. progressions are well thought out and it sounds very complete.
One thing that I really listen for is the quality of the synth. Let me elaborate to because I have had someone take this the wrong way before. You can make a nice sound in pretty much everything you use, whether it be a vst, hardware, or w/e you are using. So take some extra time to really explore and learn how to make those sounds. anyways back to the review.
Some criticisms, I think that it is to loud toward the end. when you layer the same synth they tend to be very hard to comprehend. It wasn't to bad but I think that you can find a better way to mesh those two together. I heard some clippings in the beginning and that is something no one wants (just fix it with a compression or some mastering/level tweaks.) Drums were pretty good I thought. The crashes seemed a bit loud at parts but that isn't to major of a thing. One more thing too, I honestly think that the piano could have been better. If that piano sounded better that alone would have put the song into a whole other skill level (maybe some more brightness, treble, put some more re verb on it, take out some res, and hmmm maybe even try upping the pitch?)
This song again is not that bad, its actually pretty good. Just needs some fine tuning and some more originality to it. Sorry for the long criticism too. I always try to make the positive longer but it never ends up that way. Nice job and keep up the work both of you.
4/5
Take it easy,
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gamerworld14 responds:
Thanks a lot for the criticism actually. I really appreciate how long you looked at this song to write an amazing review. Really appreciated. I will try to improve on some of those things for future songs, since I cannot really do anything to this song now (we have diff. versions of software). Thanks a lot for the review again, much appreciated :D
Your Fellow Newgrounder,
-gamerworld14
Nice,
The intro could use a little more reverb, I'm going to be nit-picky, I like how you changed up the bass drum beat, the clap might also need some delay, a tiny bit...
I like the transition, how you led it from the intro to the main part, again the clap could have also been more of a trance/dance clap...The background bass maybe a little too loud, The main melody is great, the chord progression all fits, it seems to be in the same key sig. etc....I like the fade out for a little bit (by the way I'm writing this and listening at the same time..) Good build-up......Then the main melody is back again, great full sound, the crash cymbals maybe a little to loud....Great loop .... Overall this is a great song!!!You both did excellent work!!!!
10/10
5/5
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gamerworld14 responds:
Thanks, you will have to talk to Helth about this, he is the main creator of this song, I am really happy that everybody is taking such a long time to review and criticize this song. Thanks for the download and 10/10 and 5/5! I will try to check out your work now :D
Your Fellow Newgrounder,
-gamerworld14