An interesting look at things to come
OK. I'm not going to be harsh or evil here.
I can see you're trying really hard. Honestly, you get a 10 for effort. Some elements really need work - the fire, like other people have said, is the first thing that jumps out at me. Also, you might wanna check up on perspective - the house is viewed isometrically, like in Command and Conquer or something, but what it should really be doing is getting smaller as it goes away from us. There are some good tuts on the web that'll give you an idea of what to do.
You might wanna try cleaning up your figure drawing as well. It shows a hell of a lot of promise, but it looks a little... I dunno, off.
But I can see that you're showing a lot of promise. Keep it up, and you'll improve the more you do.