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Reviews for "[LK] Lost"

Oooh nice. :3

The intro sound effect that pans from left to right is really great and sets the mood. The piano has a nice sound to it. Personally I would've softened it a little bit.
The pad that enters in at 0:17 fits well into the song. Presuming that it's a synth pad, I wonder if it would sound better if you EQ'd the high frequencies up a little. Just a guess, but you're free to try that.
At 1:08 where the piano arps, that's really nicely done. The only thing is that there is a little distortion. From 1:19 to 1:21 is where it's most audible. The piano and the pad clash with each other there. Not as in bad harmonics, but they kind of cancel each other out and muddy themselves.
From 2:25 to the end, I like it. It sounds nice and calm. :D Although I do think that you could have ended with a better cadence than the one you used.
Great job! You're improving lots!

-HFX ^_^

LK412 responds:

Thanks a lot for the review. I don't know how to fix the distortion so if you could tell me that would be awesome. Thanks for the tips and the review i really appreciate it.

Beautifal

Wow That was amazing. Thank you for creating such a wonderful song.

LK412 responds:

Thanks! It means a lot.

Zzz...

So Relaxing, Haha Sorry I Love Ambient Songs :) Overall it was Really Good Its Late So My Brain is a Bit Fried for Ideas to Make it Better, But Its Good Enough for Me To Download :)

Score:
4.44 - 4.51 (+.075)
5/5

LK412 responds:

thanks Alot!

I like the piano

This song is really ambient and relaxing, and I like it. However, there are a few things you can improve on.

1. The synth that comes in near the beginning is kind of rough, and not relaxing. Maybe you should tone it down a little or soothe it out?

2. It's a little on the short side XD

Other than that, good piece, and you can build on that :D

LK412 responds:

Yea i was told that and i will definitely change it. I really can't make songs long because i dont have so much patience for a 3-4 minute song because working on a song for more than 2-3 days makes me tired of it. Thanks for the review.

I like it, I like it alot! :D

First of all, awesome piano melody, and the build is awesome aswell :P
Nice choice of sounds, fxs and the EQing is rather nice too.
Umh, don't know if it'll sound better, but try to add some attack on the pad, as I said, I don't know if it'll actually sound better, but try it, and see how it sounds.
It ended rather abruptly, but its no biggie. Anyhow, you get almost full score from me :P

5/5
9/10
+fav

Keep it up LK :P

LK412 responds:

Thanks man i really appreciate it! Ill change the pad as soon as i can.