Oooh nice. :3
The intro sound effect that pans from left to right is really great and sets the mood. The piano has a nice sound to it. Personally I would've softened it a little bit.
The pad that enters in at 0:17 fits well into the song. Presuming that it's a synth pad, I wonder if it would sound better if you EQ'd the high frequencies up a little. Just a guess, but you're free to try that.
At 1:08 where the piano arps, that's really nicely done. The only thing is that there is a little distortion. From 1:19 to 1:21 is where it's most audible. The piano and the pad clash with each other there. Not as in bad harmonics, but they kind of cancel each other out and muddy themselves.
From 2:25 to the end, I like it. It sounds nice and calm. :D Although I do think that you could have ended with a better cadence than the one you used.
Great job! You're improving lots!
-HFX ^_^