Reviews for Distant Town

[Naruto700]

AWESOME!!!!

Yo punk7890,i love this new song you have dude..ITS AWESOMELY SCARY!!!!!OH and i have an new flash for this song..here's the story."In a alaska town,your name ryan cooper(not relating to need for speed)a ordinary citzen untill one day,power goes out on the entire city......somewhere nearby,a secret lab conducting experiments on human and turing them to viciously blood thirsty zombies goes terribly wrong,cages and little prisons holding these"INFECTIES" or "ZOMBIES"loses power and there on the lose.All the scientists die and they go into the town.Back town,the worst thing happens,not only power is out,but there is a horrible blizzard and its almost impossible to see!!!!Slowly without warning zombies feed onthe inocent,The police try killing them but there are too many of them and they eventually get swarmed,you ryan,realize the situation,finding shealter,you decide to look for weapons,ammo,heatlh supplies,and food.Luckily you find plenty,you find a pistol,SPAZ shotgon,and a mp5(along with ammo of course)and some supplies.You realize you wont be going out for a while....3 days later,you decide to go out.Ryan horribly sees bodies and blood all over the place,another surivior like you,jake,luckily finds you and asks for help,ryan gladly says'yes ill help you"he thanks you and you bothe move on,while walking back to the shealter,he turns on his portable radio,you both hear that the miliatary are sending help at the edge of town,for any survivors,but heres the f***** up part,you only have 10 days to reach the end of town.You start talking about and ryan and jake decides to head there and get rescued,when back at the shealter,while gatthering supplies,you hear horrible nosies outside,THEY HAVE FOLLOWED YOU,you quickly gatther your stuff and then says"if were going to get to the edge of town,he gotta kill all the zombies that get in our way,amazingly, a few mins later,you and jake killed all the zombies outside you go out,smelling the horrible odor,then thats when you begin your journyey,after getting lots of,ammo and supplies,you head towards a abanded pick up truck,lickily the keys are still inside and drive off......"This is just the begining,we have to find more weapons and supplies,and fight off against these zombies"jake agnwledges you and thats where your journey BEGINS!!!!!! WHOAH that was long,i cant explain the whole story,but the begining is what i mostly got out....ANEWAY,AWESOME NEW SONG,oh and what you think of my story punk7890!!!!!! XD

punk7890 responds:

Awesome story! I love reading these!

Thanks for the review. Glad you liked the song!

Check out my user page for more songs like this.

[Scrap-Metal]

Great song --AND A SCENARIO!

A heavy-duty prison, somewhere out in the middle of nowhere, home to the world's most possessed, sadistic, and violent people. Mass murderers, terrorists, and many others. The prison loses power during a violent storm, all the lights go down, other than a few powered by a backup generator. The cell's doors are unlocked, as the run on a computer system. A young janitor, 5 hours after the breakout, is perhaps the only person not being brutally executed. He is within a small room, presumably his closet. No weaponry, no defenses, only stealth. He cautiously opens his door, poking his head out to check. He makes his way through about 10 cell divisions, each one recently painted red. Smashed skulls, maimed corpses, bare torsos, decapitated bodies, and likewise are scattered everywhere. The janitor simply stares, mouth agape. A door suddenly opens, and his friend, a guard is screaming shouts of fatality. The janitor can only watch as an odd humanoid leaps upon the guard, devouring him. The guard can only shout cries of anguish, before finally passing on. Prisoners are the least of his worries. As he steps away, the being instantly turns his attention to the fleeing janitor. A chilling howl is heard throughout the prison, percussive enough to burst a man's eardrums within 15 feet. The janitor escapes, sprinting through rainwater...and blood. He makes it to his truck, hurriedly and desperately attempting to unlock it. He jumps in, quickly starting the Ford. He drives away, around 60 MPH, spraying mud everywhere. However. as he sped away, he was unknowingly followed by the horde. Perhaps closer than he thought. As he drove through a forest path, many sets of radiant yellow eyes suddenly burst open.

His truck was eventually found, as a nearby town expanded. However, the janitor was never heard from again. That town was later quarantined, leaving the civilians trapped in a sort of hell. Things were fine, until 3 weeks later, when the power went out.

punk7890 responds:

I love reading stories like this. Thanks a bunch for posting these!
Glad you enjoyed it and I enjoyed reading this. :)

[Kouskespeed]

....burrr

makes me feel in a tall mountain in a blizzard and find a abandoned town every blood and peoples torsos are all missing only way to survive for the night is to fight what ever is out there

punk7890 responds:

Ohhh that sounds about right. :)

Glad you liked it. :)

[Renshi]

Non-remix songs often make me make stories...

0:0
A man trudges through a wasteland in the night, the floor covered in black, formless slush, every step he takes kicks up the slush into the air in a dust-like appearance, the stale taste of the sludge entering his mouth every so often. This place was a battleground.... one in an ancient war, war of survival. Hulks of dead vehicles lie scattered everywhere, the power sources of the ancient wepaonry having worn itself off a long time ago.
He holds up a bracer he is wearing near his mouth, pressing down onto a button, producing a beep.
"Nothing so far... Substance 26-B has degraded into its last stage everywhere, only a junkyard remains."
The bracer 'talks' back to him, another male voice... late fourties, maybe.
"Damn it... keep looking, you've only been down on the battlefield for less than a hour! If we find a intact piece of Substance 26-B we'd be loaded for who knows how long!"
"Yeah yeah, I know... these machines must've used all of the substance's energy up over the years... I would have thought it would have started to re-grow into a hot-spot for 26-B."
He then lets go of the button, letting his hands rest at his sides. A low noise to his right is heard.. something shuffling about the sludge in the distance. The man pulls out a pistol from its hoilster... This thing fired specail slugs with suspended plasma inside its shell, the bullet itself shot via magnetic coils. It'd take care of any kind of life form on this planet.
He holds his bracer up, just pressing another button, setting it on continued broadcast.
"Hey, you know anything about this planet's inhabitants? I think i've found something... too damn dark to see anything, though."
"Eh? This side of the planet has a few harmess species... not much has survived since whatever war happened here tore apart this whole side of the planet... The rest of the planet's species is on the jungle on the other side. Hell, i'm not even sure what your hearing, I'm not picking up any lifesigns besides your own up here."
1:20
"Whatever, I know I heard something..." He says, approaching the sound, turning on an addon flashlight he has on the pistol. Suddenly something with black, pulsating bulges moves and stares at him - Its face looks like it could have been some kind of humanoid, but its face is terribly malfromed, the same black stuff on it. It starts growling, making the man yelp and unload a bolt into the thing's face, practically blowing its face up from the released plasma that melted most of its face... the sound of the mini-railgun's fire travelling over the whole area, the response being hundreds of growls, close by and in the distance.
"...Whats that? I don't like the sound of that."
His bracer says, the man being frozen for a second before looking around him, the growls are comming from EVERYWHERE around him.
"... Shit, get me out of here!" He says, looking around frantily now.
"What? I'm not even picking up any lifesigns or signals from any machines! Whats going on down there?"
Some vaugely humanod, black-bulge covered thing leaps out from the darkness with a snarl, the man blowing off the things torso, sending it backwards.
"Just do it, get your sorry ass out of space and down here NOW!"
He turns and shoots at another... then another, then slides to the side when another lunges at him, shooting it when it lands on the ground..... then he gets pwnd the end.

Too lazy to put any more in it! Beside sonly 500 characters left, lol. Nice creepy music going on! Creepy music is always good.

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due to no critique needed.

punk7890 responds:

!!!Thanks man!

I love reading your reviews. Any reviews like this are just awesome!

Glad you liked it as I did make it. Stay tuned for more. :)

People like you make me want to make more of this type of music.