Well good job making happycore. But you gotta get rid of that intro cause its not happycore material xD. But nice going into the melody and stuff with the piano and the lead coming in. I liked the kick and bass a lot and it was really nice in this song. The melody fit happycore. At 1:25 it sounded like a country song LOL. It was probably because you needed ways to extend the length of this song, and yeah its hard to make long hardcore songs cause the bpm range is like 165 ~ 180. Im currently working on a happycore song as well, and after like a days work working on it, it ends up being like 50 seconds long only..LOL.
Check it out its called Head Up, and its 170 BPM. Its just a small WIP so far but ill eventually make a full song out of it soon. Well nice happycore song for ur first one ahah. Keep up the good work :D. 10/10. 5/5