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Reviews for "Piano Collab in A Minor =HFX="

I mean amazing!!

Love it in the collab;
just a bit over the collab 40 second guideline but I'm glad it ended nice for the next piece xD

Might start Piano Collab 2
first is already over 5 mins lol - I have to cut it alot, and the file size :(

but really beautiful
thanksyou
>>Zero

Phyrnna responds:

No, thank you for organizing this piano collab in the first place. ^_^ Without that it wouldn't have happened at all.
I love what you came up with and I'm also glad with the way it's turning out. ^_^
Best of luck to you and school!

-HFX ^_^

*refer to Lamplighter's summary*

You certainly know what you're doing with that piano :)
I like the velocity changes, did you play it live maybe? If so, then good job, otherwise, good job at programming the velocities.

This collab is going to be great. :) And I think this one really fits well after mine.

Keep it up!

Phyrnna responds:

Thank you very much. Piano is my main instrument... it's the only instrument that I know how to play. >_< But I did play this out on my badly out of tune piano before I went to write it into FL. But that's also how I know what the velocities are, since I memorized the way I struck the keys on the piano and reproduced that as closely as possible on FL.
Thank you for listening and enjoying!

-HFX ^_^

Much better than mine.

I really like this one! In the beginning the left hand suddenly takes over, which sounds okay but the transition could have been a lot smoother. I really like the right hand part, though, gives a sort of upbeat feeling in a minor setting... I'm sort of picturing a dance outside in the end of autumn. People are celebrating, but are said to see the colors of fall disappear.

Very nice job on the song here! I like it a lot better than mine. :)

-Lamp

Phyrnna responds:

The left hand part and the right hand part are actually somewhat overlapping throughout the song. Which was my intention to create a somewhat overlinking feel between the two.
And yes, it has a somewhat upbeat mood, but with the minor chordal setting, it does still hold a taint of sadness.
Thank you very much for the review!

-HFX ^_^

Pastoral

Not bad at all - it has a rather calm and tranquil feel, even though it's in minor and also somewhat upbeat. I rather like the melody too - it's simple but effective, especially for a short segment. The balance feels kind of off to me, though - I think you should make your right hand notes somewhat louder than the left hand ones; the bass is kind of dominating in the mix right now. Also, the attack on the piano sounded a bit weird, as if it's not really striking or it's somewhat muted. Just minor points, though - nice piece of work!

Phyrnna responds:

Well, the balance was meant to be like that somewhat. I wanted the left hand and the right hand to somewhat meld together. The bass that stands out was there to add a sort of rhythm to the song.
Thank you for listening and enjoying!

-HFX ^_^