I like the improvement you made from Jesse's song.
I just love how the beat picks up with the drums an' all. And I just <3 the flute=like portion at around 0:55. I think those are the best aspects of this song.
It kinda has a sad note attached with gratitude and satisfaction. Kinda like when someone dies... I imagine an old man surrounded by a white aura and standing in front of a bright door (supposedly the gateway to Heaven). I always imagine him remembering his good times (like having his life flash before his life) before entering the portal. This song is very emotional. *Sniff* Great Job...
PS: You've been added into my Fav Artists after this song. Expecting great things from you (no pressure!). :)