Impressive work! Much better than the original.
This is a nice song here, Shawn. Jesse's (F-777) version (the original) was good, but your version improved it nicely. There's more feeling and emotion, upbeat around the 0:40-0:54 area, then the pan flute kicks in at 0:56-1:12. I really enjoyed the whole song and it is very calm.
A round of applause is in order. Keep it up! :)