hiyaa!
this stuff makes dragon ball z look like the teletubbies.
got 1 question though is kicking wid ya hands in ya pokets a real martial arts style. if not then ur a bloody scientist for makin it up all my friends are fightin like that now and im not jokin!
YOu've definatly improved
Your skills jumped from good to damn. Keep it up
impressive developments
i started from session 1 and this is my favorite so far. it's really impressive the way the alliances are formed throughout the story, and how i'm actually interested in the characters. i especially like how xin was originally introduced as a bad guy (or at least it seemed to me) but now it seems like he's the one worth rooting for. also, even though they're on different sides, i've been rooting for ghai too, that's what i like about this series. a lot of different sides, each with their own strengths and fears. good job.
"He went to see Xin..."
First off, I have to say I found it kind of funny rather than disturbing that Ghai went berserk on Ralph. His expression is just crazy in a hilarious way, and Ralph kind of got what was coming to him.
As for Xin, looks like he's on the low for now, not starting any fights. Remains my favorite character.
Nice cliffhanger with Legends. Things are soon gonna heat up between him and Xin...
A great series
It's a very nice series. Perhaps you should focus on getting your own website so you can promote the series. Make the flash longer too.