Awsome!!
You did such a good job with this one! I am so happy. I have complements and compaints but More complements than complaints. The only thing is that you cant hear the main melody enough because of the other "layers". I suggrst that you use the melody a little more loudly. Now for the complements. You did great with the overlapping and transitions. Another thing please give me updates of your music ok.
I hope to see you grow in succes and awsomness, Nejishiekmaster.