Wheres....
Wheres Greg?
Reviews for "Strawberry pancakes"
Snowman responds:
I ate him, with the pancakes
Entertaining comic
~~REVIEW~~
This was awhile ago but i kinda find it {AMUSING} and while it is more of a sketch then anything else, it was still cute and had some creativeness to it and all, so i did enjoy it indeed, the drawings on the sketch was pretty neat, had some funny moments and the way you did draw some of the characters was pretty good i thoought, very like standouttish, like when it seems like the guy is yelling or something, but again it seems like it also lacked other elements such as. some {COLOR} would be nice, maybe with the chachters or even just some of the outer {BORDERS/FRAMES} something along them lines though, it would make the comic stand-out abit more i think. and just something that would bringout the detail instead of it just being a sketch or so, these are just some ideas that could spruce this up for an overall better outcome. but anyways i did like it, and hope the few ideas i suggested did help.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color wwould be nice, maybe characters and or the outer frames and borders, also adding more to the comic like more {SCENE-SQUARES} would also be a nice touch.
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Good old fashion Random
This almost reminds me of something Egoraptor would've done in his early days. And by the way those pancakes do look very yummy and awesome enough like this comic! Really put a smile on my face.
That said I cant wait to see what else you got!
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dude i hope this isn't your best drawing ever because its nog very good
im srry but it just is
Not bad, but could really use color.