Decent plot, terrible graphics.
This movie could have been a whole lot more than it was. I say this because I enjoyed your plot. It was not just a mindless action movie. It had a background that actually made sense. You applied the story well. However, your animations/graphics and any other visuals were almost close to horrible.
Most of your graphics were just simple circles, squares, etc that were gradient filled. There is absolutely NO detail throughout the entire movie. Your characters expressed no emotion. It was very akward seeing the main character have big white oval eyes that didn't change expression once in the entire movie. Not only that, you used the ever-going recycling of the matrix bullet time (sfx included.) Your creativity on the graphics side was very below average. It seems like you knew what you were doing, and could have greatly improved on it if you wanted too.
The sounds were set up nicely. Nothing was overly loud or too soft. The only thing that I'd comment is real voices are much more effective than reading the text. Not that it is really needed for this particular movie, it just would have added more emotion to the movie.
The plotline was well done. You gave a background story, and everything fit into place as your movie progressed. You kept with your story instead of changing it all of a sudden in the middle of a movie. It was very easy to follow and quite enjoyable since its the most realistic action type plot I've seen in awhile.
I feel that the graphics are the main thing to work on for next time. Other than that, good job!
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