Like CH. 3
THought this was similar to chapter 3 in the length. I loved the action sequence you put forth though. Cain is a badass fighter. THos synthetics must be a dime a dozen. Look forward to more building of Cain's character......
Reviews for "_FLU!(chapter05)"
This is such a great series
Keep em coming!
Good
It's very good in fact, but this one is too short. Make more plot. I don't understand this Fluro-energy stuff. How is it that a little device can bring someone back to life? "What is a semi-plane"? (Che pasa el semi-plane?) Do people really die in the semi plane? How come their bodies disappear like in the matrix?
Better
Wow, you picked it back up. I'm once again interested in where this is going. good job.
4/5
keep it up!
I have seen the all the installments of this flash and i have to admit it is a GREAT series! The sound is a bit off in some places but other than that it is cool!
and by the way, don't listen to thoes two-bit posers who would'nt know art if it did a triple back flip off a table and bit their balls off!