Meh
It was interesting, but ESOPHAGUS was spelled wrong.
Reviews for "Into My Oesophagus"
Morlonic responds:
That is true but there are other versions of English that spell differently compared to the American style that you are familiar with. I am from Australia and hear wee spel thingz RITE!
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I liked this. Very arty and obscure- like a French cartoon. I also liked its Hitchcock-esque narrative. Did you write the poem yourself?
Morlonic responds:
Yep. I started writing it on a library desk at university then I developed it. Cheers for your review!
Not too shabby
Very creative and well put together.
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interesting. an odd idea, but well done.