Meh
It was interesting, but ESOPHAGUS was spelled wrong.
Meh
It was interesting, but ESOPHAGUS was spelled wrong.
That is true but there are other versions of English that spell differently compared to the American style that you are familiar with. I am from Australia and hear wee spel thingz RITE!
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I liked this. Very arty and obscure- like a French cartoon. I also liked its Hitchcock-esque narrative. Did you write the poem yourself?
Yep. I started writing it on a library desk at university then I developed it. Cheers for your review!
Not too shabby
Very creative and well put together.
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interesting. an odd idea, but well done.