very well made
i loved it! haha. now this is certainly not a bad cartoon if it's your second... not bad at all.
the general way that you animated it was very good, as the movie never got boring, even if nothing interesting was really happening. all of the backgrounds looked really cool, but the thing that really caught my eye was the text. because you had all of the speach text moving around, it was never dull, and there was always something happening, so it kept the movie from getting boring.
also, the graphics, animation and voices were all great. they made for a very good movie to watch. so well done, i really enjoyed watching.
overall score: 8/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!!!)