This is a weird song man...
Cool.. but weird.
I like the melody alot.. not a huge fan of the intro.. The snares arent great too. Try using another type of snare, in stead of the very noizy ones..
now.. The good parts
1 I love that melody
2 i love that melody
REally hardn stuff. The rides arent great too beyond that the drums are good..
The bass is a bit to high on scale, could be one octave lower..
I liked this, but there are things you can work on..
I personally think that u arent putting enough effort in your songs.. No offense. But 1st of all. u make m fast like hell..x) And they are good. but not the best. I like your style.
Try working on the transitions a little bit and add wooshes special fx and stuff..
I liked it.. but not that much..
sorry if im a jurk. cant help it. this is just what i think... No offense of course..