Reviews for Toml episode. 2

[M-A-R-C-U-S]

weird!!

that was very fast paced... infact, one could say a little TOO fast paced.
i felt that there wasnt too much of an intro to what was going on, and as a result the movie moved to quickly through all of the main events.
meh, maybe it was just that the movie itself was a bit short, but i think that it should have moved a bit slower. The bear in the cave idea was pretty good, but overall, not much of the plot was revealed.
Also, i found it a bit stupid how when the boy exited the cave, he was met by a HUGE drop to the ground... then, after he survived the fall, he was hit by a car... and he remained alive. a coincedince? i think not! haha.
but apart from that, i did enjoy watching the movie. but i think i should really watch the first episode to fully understand it.
well, im off to watch ep. 3 now, nice work
overall score: 6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)

[StarF68]

This isnt good...

At least you tried...

[Ken-Korrupt]

OMG! TeT wUz TeH RoX0r!

I didn't especially dislike your flash. I wasn't going to vote zero... but then I read how this is a parody of someone at your school.. and that kinda makes me feel bad - are you totally giving him the business, or is he laughing WITH you?

regardless I voted 10 on all categories, because if this a malicious act - I want this flash to exist long enough for that handicapped boy to view it.... and sue you for slander.

although I do enjoy murder mysteries involving motorized chairs... and the cadavers those chairs roll over...

Why don't you make an ambiguous charachter in a wheelchair doing similiar things..? I think you could easily have the monopoly on wheelchair related flash.

The Roly Poker... or something.

[soultaker81]

good jobb

not bad, I had actually liked it! your right about one thing the download was way too long 6.9 lol it gave me too much time to think not good at three in the morning lol well it is not bad it's just that you need to make it a little longer ^.^ well good luck on your next flash and looking foward to seeing it ;oD

leatherface-85 responds:

thanks

[Born-Slippy]

This might be funny if u develope it

But for the rest of us we don`t know this guy at school and its not gonna be as funny to us, as it is to you. Make him more of a character and exaggerate alot more and maybe then people will find it alot more funny.