replace the instrument
The beginning is nice, but the instrument i hear after that is bad, very bad. however, the melody is good.
Maby replace that second instrument with something else.
Reviews for "Night Fire"
Brilliant
Love this. If you ever add vocals to it just make sure you get a female vocalist for the job. A male vocalist would hurt it, imo. Would be helpful if you knew Beth Orton lol.
Im gonna get this on my ipod, if I come up with a fitting melody I'll send it you. I know a female singer come to think of it. Anyway, keep up the good work.
so full of happiness
it makes me feel as if i were with my girlfriend sitting in a bench or something, with a sky turning pink and stuff like that, its so fuckin cute, i would to put vocals on the song, but im not able xD cus i dont have where to record , and i live in mexico xD, keep it cool! and good luck!
amazing
awsome very very amazing
I love Mgmt and owl citys aight
and I love this, it is incredible
I would like to help put some vocals on this,
right now my music is under submission but
once you can hear it tell me if you like it and if
you would be interested in me working for you
keep it up
demented2005 responds:
thank alot, i would definatly be intrested. My main problem is i cant sing them, i can write but i can't sing it :(
But denfinatly would love to hear your version
Crazy cool! great job!
Wow, this is ridiculously cute! all the sounds and the beat work really well together. the only thing is, i wish it had vocals! it is such a nice tune, some words would just enhance the awesomeness. it definitely evokes the mad happiness you so intended. i would love to write some words for this you if you'd like.
demented2005 responds:
Thank you very much
I would love to see some lyrics actually, i agree if this
had the proper lyrics it would sound pretty good :)