10...Melody -3, Beginning -2, Harmonies +2 = 7
I was a little hesitant when I heard the beginning. You know how parents say stuff like "This music is assaulting my ears"? That's kind of what I felt like the first part was doing. Since the tempo was so fast, the harsh tone almost cuts at the eardrum. Points off for that.
But I'm glad I listened to the rest of it, because the harmonies were really enjoyable for the rest of the song.
If you wanted to revisit this, you might wanna brush up and review the song. Some of your melody was incorrect.
But I'm definitly downloading it ^_^ For what it is, it's pretty good.
~ellebirdy23