Sounds like runescape music.
I think it's great that you decided to make your own song, but the quality needs to be cleaned up (lots of static). Also try varrying the instruments a bit more- I only heard a synth, piano, flute, and drums- or increasing the complexity of the individual melodies to make the song more interesting. As previously mentioned, the ending could be smoother as well.
Good luck with your book!
-Relsek
Thanks for the critism. I 100% agree with you about the static. Unfortunately we're quite limited in the programs that we use. We should add more instruments as well, it's true, or maybe give a better melody, but since my friend and I are both using different programs, it's a little hard to find the perfect melodies and sounds. Still, thanks a lot for the suggestions. We'll consider upgrading it, but I think (and hope) our new songs are slightly less boring if you'd like to check them out. :). At least most of them have proper endings O_o.
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Thanks for the review! :)
Can't wait for the book
Great work keep it up
Thanks a bunch for the compliment. Really appreciated :).
wow
i will say this: the ending could have been a little smoother, it simply cuts off and stops. Other than that a pretty good song
Alright thanks for the review. I thougt someone would mention something about the ending. Thanks again for the 8 :)