it was okay, but...
FIX THE VOICE QUALITY!!! Don't just complain about it, man!! The only problem is the overloaded microphone sound, don't worry about your acting.
Very Matrix-like dialogue, but i'll let it slide.
Very RPG-like storyline, but I'll also let that slide.
It was okay. Your vision of a good animation is hindered by the amount of time and effort you put into it. Make the planet in the background not look like some swollen abscess on a 55-yr old's buttcheek. Tune up the detail. Make a better preloader. Don't know how? I don't either, but it's your job to find out!! You've got a great idea on your hands, just fine-tune again and again and again. That separates the 2's from the 5's, man.