Nice..
I thought is was awesome. It had a really creepy yet epic tone to it. I felt entranced by the song and all the pieces fell together nicely. The celesta thing that you brought in around 1:10 or so was cool. My favorite though was the pad you used in the intro. I don't know why but it kind of reminds me of Shpongle (pretty good band if you want to check them out) I liked pretty much everything about the song. I am sorry I can't give you any advice or criticism.
5/5
Marks-a-lot