I'll give you the full, um, score I gave the other song, but... I really wouldn't if it wasn't for the non-fully electric songs. I just don't like that kind of stuff. T_T Oh well. Its a nice song, and now I can review it in full.
I absolutely hate the intro, but thats just because its my opinion since I absolutely positively hate vocals. Especially when it says "BASE" or w/e it said. Now that i've listened to the intro more fully I appreciate the hardcore-ness more, the intro just made me zoom past the whole intro though =P. You did a nice job keeping it non-repeditive by putting in the softer part.
At around 1:30 it gets pretty nice, its like a mix of hardcore and soft-ish, without being too bad, it sounds realistic enough to be creative, it has a non-repeditive tone, but then you put in that vocal again... >.<.
Anyway, This is a superbly well-done song for this song not being a remix of some song already made. Congrats dere person ;3