Well, personally I don't like people making 'episodes' in which nothing at all happens - but overlooking that, it was pretty good. The motorbike was very well done - almost out of place, so it's just as well those other guns were done pretty good. I think that gun they point at him at the start was a jpg? Whats with that shit?
Good on you for doing voice acting, though I think the highballs voice ruined a bit of credibility.
I did notice the little things that showed you put some effort into this, such as that 3D effect of the streetlights, stuff like that - the blood on the walls was good, it was entertaining - I'd just rather you held off releasing the movie until it was finished.