good job
but im just off from school so its not interest me so much, but good work aneway mate keep it rolling.
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Reviews for "XIN Session 09"
Great series
Just watched the whole series. Great job, just finish the voices and it'll be top notch. Good storyline, unexpected results. Rock on with Chapter 2.
Good Story but clean your art up!
its all very well to have a messy style but you need to at least kep it messy this was all over the place, make it all the same style and you well get a better score.
ok flash but pretty bleh in a lot of ways
dot... dot... dot... whores. school admin nazis. buildings with so many cracks in them they look like they belong in iraq. yeah, right. ghai understands the school system... we'll be transfered. better environment... mm hmm. he'll challenge the system. yeah. law expelling students. right. then why is he there in the first place? way, way, too many, commas, in the script, here. i'm flying through walls!!! wheeee. just another angry beast spawned from the sytem. right? riot police. w00t. bloody people everywhere... yeah... and this is news, right? there's time for a gang war of sorts to wind up, but there's no intervention until the cops show up with tear gas and billy clubs. yay. terrible food in the hospital. dude... you're trying WAY too hard to be a japanimation star... and you're just failing. don't get me wrong, they all pretty much suck... which means you should fit right in. they all have odd, jumpy conclusions, distorted social views unsuitable for an american audience (otherwise, why would you post it on newgrounds?), far-fetched plot points that reflect short-sightedness and a lack of charismatic insight, and jokes that my DOG could come up with. c'mon. if you're going to try to make a story of something at least think about what you're trying to portray beyond the art and fight scenes for a moment, here. animation was ok, art was good, sound was bleh, no humor, but i'll give you style points for the attempt at creating something. engage that big gray ball of crap in your skull and THINK before you type script. when i rate your violence better than your style you know something is wrong here. yeah yeah yeah, tell me how wrong i am and why i don't deserve to review you... but i'm the consumer. i'm the audience. appease me or suffer eternal failure or at least short-lived semi-kinda-not-really fame and glory.
Nice.
This series has always rocked. Great job.