Margadona everything is on fire .....please help that person
the way you made this........from the drums to the guitars is what I expect to hear when someone claims to be industrial......damn......if hit or miss this is a hit for sure........you could sneak into brainwaves and control the hands and arms till they do what you want.......made me feel a little too good........You don't have to fix anything but if you want try a little chorus somwhere in a new song......like just one little part even if you just rant for a second.......might add more punch or something.......
Master-K 
Dunso 