meh...
Better synths and a better bass. Just some of it doesn't feel like professional. Now don't get me wrong, its an OK song, but really not front page worthy.... It just doesn't have enough sample layers... around 2:40, it would be nice to have a single note playing in the background to have a nice ambiance to it. But overall, the song is a little too bland, It was kind of boring to listen to. Just keep trying, and you will get better.
Alright, it was all taken in note, I will do that next time. Thanks for the review. :)
Just doesn't cut it with the pro's
I'm guessing this made top 5 because loads of people have seen that it's a remix/cover (or whatever) of god is a DJ by faithless.
You change the kick drum part way through, that's bad practice, you should keep it constant.
I know dance music is repetitive, but not to this extent. It's the same lines over and over and over, spice things up a bit! The vocal excerpt doesn't even match the tempo of the song in some areas and I can hear some of the original song in the background, very sloppy. The vocals should have been time-stretched to fit or the song should have been slower.
Some volume levels are also in need of some love, the hi-hats for example dominate over the rest of the song. Consider giving the mastering a once over.
You also have very few synths and sound effects going on. I can hear a bass, a synth-lead, a tinkle and some drums. Thats about it. Try to spice it up some more, add some sound effects, change it up with a different chord progression, some breaks and so on. Just be creative.
Over-all... clearly amateur, not bad, but other amateurs have done better.
6/10 & 2/5
Thanks. But you're not a pro so don't act like one. There is no "original song" in the background since it's a perfectly clean acapella. Otherwise, there was not mastering done to this track and I couldn't care less about what you think.
Awesome
I really enjoyed this keep up the good work. I look forward to hearing more stuff in the future.
Thank you :)
omg!
I LOVE THIS!
haha thanks for the review. :)
Keep it up (Y)
10/10 5/5 Nice beat. U shouldve put the voice a lil bit volume down Im adding this to my fav's
Alright, i'll keep that in mind next time thanks for the review. :)