Nice!
Though If there were voices it would be even nicer... Good series though
Reviews for "Edge - Part 3"
Confuzzled responds:
Yeah I have set the goal to have voices in it by part 5 even if its just the voice of Rigger when he is thinking
Decent
You have a good series going. Looks like you're gonna get some voice acting. Really wish you'd do something about the typos and stuff.
*Typos*
"nice to see you has happy as always..."
nice to see you as happy as always...
"your much too weak to fight me"
you're much too weak to fight me
"I need to stay somewhere tonight to I'm going to sleep here"
tonight so I'm going to sleep here
tonight too, I'm going to sleep here
"anyone form this area of Edge"
anyone from this area of Edge
"A summoner a?"
?
"Your...a...Underland creature"
Your...an...Underland creature
"my powers are still week"
my powers are still weak
Confuzzled responds:
ah yeah sorry, typos shouldent be there because the hole thing was put though a spell checker, It might be because i'm useing a brittish spell checker, we spell things different form other conteries. Happy that you like
Very Nice M8
This Is Really VERY Nice m8 =D Which I Could Do This ;)
- Jeroentjevis -
Confuzzled responds:
its only taken me 3 years to get this good, although if i had bothered ot read a turotial it wud have taken about 5 minutes LOL
i wish someone else
had reviewed this first, i dont know whats so great about it!
Confuzzled responds:
who said there was anything greate about it, its just an verage toon