Reviews for NG Army News 1

[WavyGravy]

Artwork needs work, Goals were met.

Hmm not bad. The voices as you mentioned could clarify a bit more. The artwork of the NG army's members were decent. The Background on the alley seemed to come alive as a NES background ,haha. The messages were entertaining to read and the news content was good.

What needs to be added is subtitles for the diologues and a short name tag for each time a new member is screened. That could very well distinguish who is who.

To Paul, this flash defnitely improved over your last one(s). Keep improving man!

-BR

TheNGArmy responds:

Thanks man, i really appreciate that. I'll go back and add the names of each person as they appear. I'll see about subtitles in a week or two if the audio tweeking doesn't pan out.

Thanks for the review!

[LethalDosage]

That was funny.

Finally it comes out, congratulations on finally completing it. It was funny, Did you clarify that tom, and wade scene?, If you didn't I'm sure they won't care anyways.
yea the only thing that needs work on are the voices, you can hear the people breathing on the mic. but overall awsome good work. I hope to see some more soon.

TheNGArmy responds:

Thanks for the review!

We'll hopefully fix the voice clarity soon but the voices are as good as can be expected from the sound recorder program every computer comes with.

[Atomicus]

Yay!

Well I'd say that the translation from script to movie went VERY well. I'll be working on the next script asap.

TheNGArmy responds:

Thank you Atomicus, It was an excellent script you wrote and i'm only sorry that some cuts had to be made. I'm sure NGAN 2 will be even better that the original.

Thanks for the review!

[KWAS71KCK]

good one

it was pretty good, a bit short, but still good.

TheNGArmy responds:

Ya, this was the cut version because some ideas just didn't make it in time, the next one should be longer (hopefully with more commercials).

Thanks for the review.

[Vaporman]

Really Boring

This had some things going for it, but overall it was really boring to watch.

TheNGArmy responds:

Well ppl that don't like the news and aren't familiar with the BBS are probably not going to like this, but thanks for you opinion.