You know what is needed in this...
some deep sorrowful singing or poetry...
Deep is the night that encompasses my soul...
How I dread for the days of old....
where shadows sleep and the moon gazes....
Upon the sheep who blissfully grazes...
The Shepherd of the night prowls the grass..
Hoping to find a wolf in the pass...
etc.
nice. thank you.
can you upload it with singing?
please?
this music don't have words... i'm sorry.(( but i will think about it
A section of my story, yet to be officialy named
Aria found some dried sticks, and cast "Burn". She curled up beside the fire, but it didn't warm her very much as the cold wind cut across the empty field. The sun hid behind dark clouds and soon, it began to snow. Aria slowly and solemnly stood and looked up at the flakes falling down.
"Koro... you certainly would enjoy the snow, wouldn't you...?" she whispered. Tears slowly crept down Aria's face. She tried to remember the fun times they had together, but all she thought of was her mangled body, ripped to shreds by the wolves in the pit. "Torek... TOREK, YOU BASTARD!" The ground shook as Aria brought forth stones and shattered them with lightning.
As she was about to destroy another boulder, she remembered Koro's face. It almost seemed as it was telling her, "Heh, you would do that, wouldn't you? You can't even stop a mage weaker than you, yet you shatter stones. You're helpless, Aria."
sorrowful and beautiful...
she walks out into the cold...
the snow falls around her,
dusting her hair
she looks like porcelain,
so pretty , so perfect...
as she gazes up to the sky,
her eyes black as night,
and she cries...
tears of sorrow... tears of loneliness...
this is the end...
yeah this song makes me want to write poetry lol :] i love this... great job... and yeah i guess it would be pretty cool with lyrics like everyone is saying, but i like it just the way it is...
write a book of poetry. Shakespeare could be proud of you ^_^
RANDGRAY
yeah ......yep, i like this one. definitely reminds me of winter, and some walking, and not being very excited about something.