Reviews for "First Winter Snow"

:( sad

this reminds me of my darkest moment :(


yeah ......yep, i like this one. definitely reminds me of winter, and some walking, and not being very excited about something.

A section of my story, yet to be officialy named

Aria found some dried sticks, and cast "Burn". She curled up beside the fire, but it didn't warm her very much as the cold wind cut across the empty field. The sun hid behind dark clouds and soon, it began to snow. Aria slowly and solemnly stood and looked up at the flakes falling down.
"Koro... you certainly would enjoy the snow, wouldn't you...?" she whispered. Tears slowly crept down Aria's face. She tried to remember the fun times they had together, but all she thought of was her mangled body, ripped to shreds by the wolves in the pit. "Torek... TOREK, YOU BASTARD!" The ground shook as Aria brought forth stones and shattered them with lightning.
As she was about to destroy another boulder, she remembered Koro's face. It almost seemed as it was telling her, "Heh, you would do that, wouldn't you? You can't even stop a mage weaker than you, yet you shatter stones. You're helpless, Aria."

sorrowful and beautiful...

she walks out into the cold...
the snow falls around her,
dusting her hair
she looks like porcelain,
so pretty , so perfect...
as she gazes up to the sky,
her eyes black as night,
and she cries...
tears of sorrow... tears of loneliness...
this is the end...

yeah this song makes me want to write poetry lol :] i love this... great job... and yeah i guess it would be pretty cool with lyrics like everyone is saying, but i like it just the way it is...

karthon responds:

write a book of poetry. Shakespeare could be proud of you ^_^


now im emo thnx

karthon responds:

yur welcome.