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Reviews for "Fredgy - Reality"

hmmmm

its ok.... sounds like you tried a lil to hard on it.

you need to stop working so hard and just let it flow. music comes from the soul and as such moves in its own natural way, though its saddening many of us do not posses the mental capacity to express that nature.

anyways, sorry but this songs a 3 its apparent that you tried very hard on this but you tried to hard, and it damaged the overall quality of the song.

It seems like you found a new tool to use and got excited about it near the end of this songs production (the most evident instrument).

try lowering its volume so it doesn't stand out as much or raising the volume of the other instruments, that should make it shine.

Fredgy responds:

thanks, ye i know, it was a bit to much, i 'll see what i can do

Grts
Fredgy

Sounds terrible

i gotta be honest this sounds terrible man im not a trance man soo thats wat i think sorry...

Fredgy responds:

it was in trance genre, but i putted it there bcause my other songs are standing there, and look to the top, the genre is already some days ago changed to miscellaneous,,, this isn't a trance song, lol
please check first and then review
ok?

Grts
Fredgy

lol

I'm giving you a ten because its obvious that you are new to this which is fine...
You are very lucky to have reached top 5 with this track. lol
I'm pretty sure I have heard every sound in this song as presets before...
Not to be a dick or anything... but try and get some new samples or at least one VST. Good job for a newbie I suppose... I messed around with all of these sounds when I first started along time ago.
I do not know where the audio portal is going anymore... its scaring me :P
Just because some different sounds sound good does not mean they will sound good together... remember that.
Try to make them all fit together to sound nice.
Maybe mess around with volume adjustments and add some fx or compress some synths... I dunno.
Keep at it thought and I hope to hear a newer track of yours with not all presets!
Still gave you a 5 and 10!

Fredgy responds:

Really thanks for vote, advice.. !
i know that there are presets in, but it was the idea for using it as 2th tune, it is also the first time in my 3 songs that i use it, my other 2 songs are made all by myself! Maybe listens also to them if you don't mind? and say me then what you think about it ( if you didn't listen them yet )
Thanks

Grts
Fredgy

Interesting

I really like how you incorporated a lot of sounds in this song.
The main tune is pretty funky, so it's cool, but it's nto really my thing.
The ending was kinda sudden, I think it might be better to end with a chord or fade, if your not going to cut out instruments gradually.
The main synth is a good choice. Strong.
One thing I thought was the strange clickety sound that came in at 1:06. It sounded like someone went crazy with bubble wrap. I didn't think it really fit.
Another thing, I think you could have done more work with the drums and bass, varied them more. Also a stronger bass would be nice.
All in all very nice. 8/10, 4/5

Fredgy responds:

Thanks for your vote, review & advice! :p
If i make another version of this song, i 'll really try to make it different what you didn't really liked, or wha you would change
Thanks

Grts
Fredgy

I know what this is.

This is fruity loops isn`t it?

Fredgy responds:

yes it is fruity loops 7 xxl producers edition

Grts
Fredgy