hmmmm
its ok.... sounds like you tried a lil to hard on it.
you need to stop working so hard and just let it flow. music comes from the soul and as such moves in its own natural way, though its saddening many of us do not posses the mental capacity to express that nature.
anyways, sorry but this songs a 3 its apparent that you tried very hard on this but you tried to hard, and it damaged the overall quality of the song.
It seems like you found a new tool to use and got excited about it near the end of this songs production (the most evident instrument).
try lowering its volume so it doesn't stand out as much or raising the volume of the other instruments, that should make it shine.